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"The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Shohs » Sun Jan 31, 2010 9:25 pm

:)

Thanks!

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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Cool Trainer Kyle » Sun Jan 31, 2010 9:30 pm

Haha oh I am don't worry :)
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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Broags » Mon Feb 01, 2010 4:25 am

Thanks Shohs.

I agree with Kyle, each chapter shows not only development of the story but also the writer. I enjoyed reading this and found myself getting though it more quickly than the first two chapters. As this is just the base (getting people familiar with the characters and world) it bodes well for the rest of the tale.

I hope you have enjoyed writing and developing this as much as I have enjoyed reading it. You have the beginnings of a unique fantasy epic.

Well done and thanks for posting.

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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Shohs » Mon Feb 01, 2010 9:24 pm

Thank you, and you're welcome :)
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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Cool Trainer Kyle » Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:41 am

I just wanted to say, I read everything as if it were one installment, posted at the same moment. It flows as if there was almost no pause. Everything is masterfully connected. To be honest, I thought of water flowing from a faucet turned all the way on. It approaches you with full force, flowing at a definite pace, with the potential of flowing indefinately. The only way the story stops, is if I stop reading.

This is actually one of the few fantasies that I've read that seems to continue even after reading. I know I was always told in school to act as if the story was still a work in progress. Although you read it, you should act like the story always continues, or repeats itself, or something of the like. Although most of these types of writers intend for their stories to take you away to this far away place, and they do, I've always imagined them to take place in a time long ago, and stay there.

However, yours is one of the few, Shohs, that not only calls upon me in my dreams, but also invades my mind during the day time. As if I was watching everything unfold and trying to figure out the details for myself.

Again, as with everything I say, I probably sound a bit circumlocutional, but, I still feel like you know what I'm trying to say. *laughing*
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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Shohs » Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:17 pm

:)

I have no idea what circumlocutional means *laughing*

But thank you, I am glad that it works that way, especially considering the long break I took between chapters two and three :o
I was concerned at the start of three that they wouldn't connect well enough due to the break. Just hope I can keep up with the same writing style *laughing*
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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Cool Trainer Kyle » Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:34 am

Circumlocutional-beating around the bush. I never get to the point lol.

But, I think that because you were able to keep the same writing style and were able to make everything flow so well, probably subconsciously, you'll maintain that. And the way I see it, you usually don't work backwards in writing, unless you haven't written in a very long time. In your case I can only see improvement. It'll all work out pretty well.
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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Broags » Wed Feb 24, 2010 5:21 pm

Chapter 4 ? I want more...

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Re: "The Hero" - Prologue (Chapter three released!)

Postby Shohs » Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:43 pm

Might. I dunno. I'll let you know when it's done, but that requires starting to write it first.
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Postby Kat » Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:45 am

I am bumping this in the hopes that Shohsy will log on and remember to write.
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