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-Prove It-

PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:57 pm
by animefreak247
We are the people that chase are dreams.
Get up everyday and do the right thing.
Day by day we grow stronger and wiser.
We are the ones the others look up to.
In todays world you have to stand strong.

We can not let the hate get to us.
Are souls not need to be rested.
They crave more.
We want to prove that we are the best.
But in the end it seems we never get what we want.
Everyone looks up to us.

Trys to figure out how do we get this far.
We try are best to get there.
Never giving up, But riseing up.
The days just go by faster and faster.
It seems like a dream.

Time flying by.
Wondering how did we get this far.
Asking the same question everyday.
Same thing.
Wake up, do what you have to do.

But, you still wonder why?
Still asking how?
It is not as easy as it seems.
Just look at yourself in a mirror and tell me what you see...

I hope you like it... :)

Re: -Prove It-

PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:41 am
by Termes
When u say are= it should be "our" because i don't think it makes sense in that context.

Otherwise, i thought it was really good, did you write it yourself >=?

Re: -Prove It-

PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 6:19 pm
by animefreak247
Well thanks for letting me know that....And yes I wrote that myself.

Re: -Prove It-

PostPosted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:58 pm
by DarkAizen
It looks nice , but i get da feeling i read this somewhere :^)

Re: -Prove It-

PostPosted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:25 pm
by animefreak247
Well it came straight from my head...So i don't know where else you could of read it lol.

Re: -Prove It-

PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:14 pm
by Ruthra
nice! :)