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2nd song.....!!!!!!!!!

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2nd song.....!!!!!!!!!

Postby Slim_Shaddy316 » Fri Jan 07, 2011 1:19 pm

well i tried 2 cmplete ths song as fast as i could n i finishd ths up in 1 hr.......
i didnt get proper chorus 4 ths song so i used the chorus 4m akons beautifull song..
hope u all lyk ths song........

Ur so beautifulllll (yo)
So damn beautifulllll(Yaa)
U r so beautifullllll (yoo)
So damn beautifullllll(aaha)

I still remember dat day whn v met 4 1st tym
In d club u were standin wth ur frnds
I had never sawn a gal as beautiful as u
N i decided 2 get closer wth u
Bt I was scared of ur frnds who were starin on me
N I didn’t wantd 2 stand tough
I wantd 2 b wth u bt I guess didn’t had so much guts
Thnk god as he was wth me on dat day
U came in my way n I was turned all grey
Hello said u n I was jst stucked in my mouth
Unknwingly I placed my shoe on ur sandal
U were a bit scared n u screamd oouch
I wantd 2 say sorry bt couldn’t say more thn S
Its ok u said n told dat ur name was jess
I lukd in ur eyes who were lyk a new sunrise
N I was goin crazy 4 u n I replied ma name is slim
U just smiled quietly wth a small glim

Grl u r so beautifulllllllllllll
So damn beautifulllll(Yaa)
U r so beautifullllll (yoo)
So damn beautifullllll(aaha)

N I had never imagined dat v could meet again
Bt thnk u god 4 his mercyful grace
Coz due 2 him I was able 2 get ur trace
U were d newest grl in our hood
N all d guyz wantd 2 b ur frnds as soon as they could
Evn I 2 wantd 2 catch u up bt was a bit afraid
V had only met once n wht if u don’t remember me..?
I would certainly shatter me into small pieces
Tht stupid thought just got me laid
N thankfully v met again n u said hey slim
I was surprised dat u still remember ths stupid chump
Whts up u asked nthin much I replied
Would u cm 4 a movie 2nite I said
Y not u exclaimd I vil catch u at 7
I almost in d heaven n I was feelin lyk a star
I went near ur house n I was exactly on tym
N wen u came out I was lyk gone on d moon
U were lookin so gud so pretty so nice
N so beautifullllllll
So damn beautifulllll(Yaa)
U r so beautifullllll (yoo)
So damn beautifullllll(aaha)
I had never imagind dat v could eva b more thn frnds
Gal u were so precious 2 me I nevr end
The relationship v had was vry near n special
N I was goin 2 propose u soon
Below d nice dark moon
I evn brought a ring n I was also gonna sing
Bt dat I calld u several tyms bt u didn’t answerd ma phone
I was afraid n I ran till I reachd ur home
Bt u house was lockd n u were just gone….
I was shockd I searchd 4 u so long
All d dreams I thought were jus shatterd n clatterd
I was turnd insane I used walk near ur lane
Hopin u vil meet me again n all d things vil b as as gud n fine
Bt dat day never came hw could u do ths wth me jess
U once said tht u lykd me 2 bt luk at things nw
Everything is so messd
Jus answr 1 questn jess Y…??
I hav been so obssed
I keep talkin 2 my self n I keep screamin ur name
Stay calm slim calm down jus keep 1 thing in mind
Remember d last line of ur 1st song…..???
Sh** happens Luv really is blind…….


Ur so beautifulllll (yo)
So damn beautifulllll(Yaa)
U r so beautifullllll (yoo)
So damn beautifullllll(aaha)
(u were so beautiful)
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Re: 2nd song.....!!!!!!!!!

Postby Kay-C » Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:04 pm

Reminds me of Replay - Iyaz.
Great work.
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Re: 2nd song.....!!!!!!!!!

Postby Slim_Shaddy316 » Sat Jan 08, 2011 5:27 am

Kay-C wrote:Reminds me of Replay - Iyaz.
Great work.


Thxx bRo.........
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Re: 2nd song.....!!!!!!!!!

Postby G-Dragon » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:02 am

You Have A Great Future To Be A Composer Dude ~_^ Good Luck On The Future
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Re: 2nd song.....!!!!!!!!!

Postby Slim_Shaddy316 » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:14 am

G-Dragon wrote:You Have A Great Future To Be A Composer Dude ~_^ Good Luck On The Future

Thxx DUde.............
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